[fitsbits] forwarded message from Eric Greisen
Eric Greisen
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Fri Oct 22 16:47:07 EDT 2004
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From: Eric Greisen <egreisen at nrao.edu>
To: Patrick Wallace <ptw at star.rl.ac.uk>
Cc: William Pence <William.D.Pence at nasa.gov>, fitswcs at nrao.edu
Subject: Re: [fitswcs] Start of the WCS Paper III Public Comment Period
Date: Fri, 22 Oct 2004 14:46:03 -0600
Patrick Wallace writes:
> * 2, after expression (2): I can't parse the sentence "The zero
> transverse velocity case is shown..." Is there a way of making it
> clearer?
>
> * I saw both "Angstrom" and "\AAngstrom" in the text (i.e. not in
> quoted strings). I suspect omitting the ring when spelling out
> the full name is better, unless you're prepared to go the whole
> hog and write \AAngstr\"om.
>
> * 3.4.1, final paragraph: in the sentence "That is not to say...in
> practice" change the comma and semicolon into --- ---.
>
> * 3.4.4, first paragraph: in the sentence "These are fundamental...
> purpose", add a comma after "Paper~1".
>
> * Bottom of that page: change the comma in "algorithm codes," to a
> semicolon.
>
> * 5.1, final paragraph: in "refraction effects which are naturally" I
> suspect that "that" is more correct than "which".
>
>
> * 7, in "...are the sidereal time and the observatory location", get a
> cheap post-IAU-2000 veneer by adding "(or Earth rotation angle)" after
> "sidereal time".
>
> * 10.2, in "rotation of the earth", capitalize "Earth" (matching "Sun"
> later in the same sentence).
>
> * Reference to IERS TN 32: missing umlauts. The reference should read
> "Verlag des Bundesamts f\"ur Kartographie und Geod\"asie, Frankfurt am
> Main".
I have made these corrections and have also added the DATE-AVG
keyword. As Stve points out the table form that one would usually
adopt id DATAna which is a bit unfortunate. Does it actually conflict
with anything however? The new papers are found from my main page
http://www.aoc.nrao.edu/~egreisen/
with links part of the way done below the license plate pix. The
actual documents are
http:///www.aoc.nrao.edu/~egreisen/scs_041022.pdf
http:///www.aoc.nrao.edu/~egreisen/scs_041022.ps
http:///www.aoc.nrao.edu/~egreisen/scs_041022.ps.gz
in decreasing order of size. Prveious versions are retained in the gz
form
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 565838 Oct 22 14:37 scs_041022.ps
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 204982 Oct 22 14:37 scs_041022.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 922217 Oct 22 14:37 scs_041022.pdf
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 204658 Oct 4 11:42 scs_041004.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 204178 Aug 15 16:19 scs_040815.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 204118 Jun 10 08:51 scs_040610.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 198713 Apr 15 2004 scs_040415.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 198705 Mar 22 2004 scs_040322.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 197974 Feb 24 2004 scs_040224.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 192078 Dec 18 2003 scs_031218.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 186305 Oct 2 2003 scs_031002.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 183671 Sep 12 2003 scs_030912.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 184290 Sep 8 2003 scs_030908.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 180923 May 20 2003 scs_030520.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 180536 Dec 6 2002 scs_021206.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 179083 Nov 13 2002 scs_021113.ps.gz
- -rw-r--r-- 1 egreisen aipspgmr 166982 Jul 8 2002 scs_020708.ps.gz
Thanks Pat, Bill, Doug, and Steve for their comments. See you at
ADASS Sunday.
Eric Greisen
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